Portrait shoot tank clock Malvern 18 08 2021

[nigelc]

Here are some images I have taken at the last Portrait shoot in Malvern behind the tank clock. Like to know your thoughts

[BrianMet]

thanks for sharing Nigel.
Top 1, I would get Megsy's mum right over to the left, this would bring the candle more central, and give a bit more drama Also the lighting is obviously wrong as the main light is from the left, so tone down the exposure on the nose and forehead and correct your colour balance to reflect the candle light.

Thanks for sharing but I would think if you want comments post it in the critique page